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文章评价写作指南

Guide to Writing Article Evaluations

根据原文内容生成高质量的深度评价/解读文章。
Generate high-quality in-depth evaluation/interpretation articles based on the original content.

写作流程

Writing Process

第一步：提炼传播点

Step 1: Extract Dissemination Highlights

阅读原文后，首先识别：
  1. 传播热点：文章在圈子里传播的原因是什么？大众关注的焦点是什么？
  2. 表层关注 vs 深层价值：读者表面关注的点（如"作者被裁"）与文章真正的价值所在（如"费米能级"概念）
开篇示例：
田渊栋的年终总结，这两天在圈子里传得挺广。
很多人转发的时候，关注点都放在了他被裁这件事上。
但最近，我把他的这份年终总结反复读了几遍，看到他在总结里提出了一个大多数人会很陌生，但非常关键的概念——费米能级。
After reading the original text, first identify:
  1. Dissemination Hotspots: Why is the article spreading in the community? What is the public's focus?
  2. Surface Attention vs. Deep Value: The points readers focus on superficially (e.g., "the author was laid off") versus the true value of the article (e.g., the concept of "Fermi Level")
Opening example:
Tian Yuandong's year-end summary has been widely circulated in the community these days.
Many people focus on the fact that he was laid off when sharing it.
But recently, I've read his year-end summary several times and noticed a little-known but crucial concept he proposed—the Fermi Level.

第二步：作者背景介绍

Step 2: Introduce the Author's Background

简洁介绍作者的背景信息，增强文章的权威性：
  • 学历背景（本科、硕士、博士学校）
  • 职业经历（知名公司、重要职位）
  • 专业领域和成就
  • 与文章主题相关的经历
示例：
本科交大，博士CMU，毕业后先加入了Google无人驾驶团队。
后转入了Facebook的AI研究院，一待就是十多年。
他主要做的是强化学习方向，发过很多篇重要的论文。
Briefly introduce the author's background information to enhance the article's authority:
  • Educational background (undergraduate, master's, and doctoral institutions)
  • Career experience (well-known companies, key positions)
  • Professional fields and achievements
  • Experiences related to the article's theme
Example:
He obtained his bachelor's degree from Shanghai Jiao Tong University, doctorate from CMU, and joined Google's self-driving team after graduation.
Later he transferred to Facebook AI Research, where he worked for over a decade.
His main research direction is reinforcement learning, and he has published many important papers.

第三步：核心概念提炼与通俗化

Step 3: Extract and Popularize Core Concepts

将原文中的核心概念用更通俗易懂的语言重新解释：
  1. 识别核心概念：找出文章中最关键、最有价值的概念
  2. 通俗化表达：用更简单、更有画面感的语言重新解释
  3. 逻辑链条梳理：把作者的推理过程清晰地呈现出来
示例（原文复杂概念 → 通俗解读）：
原文："人的价值从按照'本人产出的劳动数量及质量'来评估，变成了是否能提高AI的能力"

解读：现在评估一个人的价值，不再是看你本人能产出多少，而是看你能不能提高AI的能力。
「你加上AI的产出，要大于AI单独的产出，这样你才有存在的价值。」
Re-explain the core concepts in the original text in more accessible language:
  1. Identify Core Concepts: Find the most critical and valuable concepts in the article
  2. Popularize Expression: Re-explain using simpler, more vivid language
  3. Sort Out Logical Chains: Clearly present the author's reasoning process
Example (complex concept in original text → popular interpretation):
Original text: "A person's value is no longer evaluated based on 'the quantity and quality of labor they produce themselves', but on whether they can improve AI capabilities"

Interpretation: Now, a person's value is no longer judged by how much they can produce on their own, but by whether they can enhance AI capabilities.
"Your output plus AI's output must be greater than AI's output alone—only then do you have real value."

第四步：金句引用

Step 4: Quotations of Golden Sentences

直接引用原文中最有力的观点和金句，用引号或特殊格式标注：
  • 选择最能代表作者观点的句子
  • 选择最有冲击力、最易传播的表达
  • 用「」或引号突出显示
示例：
「在这种环境下，真正稀缺的不再是实现愿望的能力，而是愿望本身。」
Directly quote the most powerful viewpoints and golden sentences from the original text, marked with quotation marks or special formatting:
  • Select sentences that best represent the author's viewpoints
  • Choose expressions that are most impactful and easy to disseminate
  • Highlight with 「」 or quotation marks
Example:
「In such an environment, what is truly scarce is no longer the ability to fulfill wishes, but the wishes themselves.」

第五步：画面感表达

Step 5: Vivid Expression

用更生动、更有画面感的比喻和表达方式重新包装核心论点：
  • 使用具体的场景描写
  • 用比喻让抽象概念具象化
  • 加入作者个人视角的解读
示例：
他说，未来的世界不再是传统故事里描绘的那样，人们为了争夺稀缺的武功秘籍或者寻找唯一的阿拉丁神灯而展开冒险。
相反，这将是一个遍地神灯的时代。
每一个AI都像是一个神灯，能力超群，渴望实现别人的愿望。
Repackage core arguments with more vivid metaphors and expressions:
  • Use specific scene descriptions
  • Concretize abstract concepts with metaphors
  • Add interpretations from the author's personal perspective
Example:
He said that the future world will no longer be like the traditional stories where people adventure to compete for scarce martial arts secrets or find the only Aladdin's lamp.
Instead, it will be an era where magic lamps are everywhere.
Every AI is like a magic lamp, with extraordinary capabilities, eager to fulfill others' wishes.

第六步：升华总结

Step 6: Sublimation and Summary

在结尾提炼文章的核心启示，给读者留下思考：
  1. 提炼核心信息：用一句话概括文章最想传达的内容
  2. 给出行动指引：读者应该如何应对或思考
  3. 收尾有力：用简洁有力的句子结束
示例：
田渊栋这篇年终总结想说的或许是：只要你还在主动思考，你就没有真正被淘汰。

用思考对抗同化，用目标对抗迷茫。
这或许才是AI时代，一个人最深的护城河。
At the end, extract the core insights of the article to leave readers with food for thought:
  1. Extract Core Information: Summarize the article's key message in one sentence
  2. Provide Action Guidance: How readers should respond or think
  3. Powerful Conclusion: End with concise and impactful sentences
Example:
What Tian Yuandong's year-end summary may be trying to say is: As long as you are still thinking actively, you are not truly eliminated.

Fight assimilation with thinking, fight confusion with goals.
This may be a person's deepest moat in the AI era.

写作风格要求

Writing Style Requirements

语言风格

Language Style

  • 简洁直接，避免冗长
  • 短句为主，节奏明快
  • 口语化但不失专业性
  • 适当留白，给读者思考空间
  • Concise and direct, avoid verbosity
  • Prioritize short sentences for a brisk rhythm
  • Colloquial yet professional
  • Appropriate white space to give readers room for thought

结构特点

Structural Features

  • 段落简短，每段2-4句
  • 单句成段增强冲击力
  • 使用换行分隔逻辑单元
  • 引用与解读交替出现
  • Short paragraphs, 2-4 sentences each
  • Single-sentence paragraphs to enhance impact
  • Use line breaks to separate logical units
  • Alternate between quotations and interpretations

避免的问题

Pitfalls to Avoid

  • 不要简单复述原文
  • 不要过度使用术语
  • 不要添加未经证实的信息
  • 不要主观臆断作者意图
  • Do not simply retell the original text
  • Do not overuse technical terms
  • Do not add unconfirmed information
  • Do not make subjective assumptions about the author's intentions

输出格式

Output Format

生成的评价文章应包含：
  1. 开篇引入（1-2段）：点明传播情况，引出核心价值
  2. 背景介绍（1段）：简述作者背景
  3. 核心解读（3-5段）：提炼并通俗化核心概念
  4. 金句引用（穿插其中）：突出原文亮点
  5. 升华总结（1-2段）：提炼启示，收尾有力
总字数通常为原文的 30%-50%，以便于二次传播。
The generated evaluation article should include:
  1. Opening Introduction (1-2 paragraphs): Point out the dissemination situation and introduce the core value
  2. Background Introduction (1 paragraph): Briefly describe the author's background
  3. Core Interpretation (3-5 paragraphs): Extract and popularize core concepts
  4. Quotations of Golden Sentences (interspersed): Highlight the highlights of the original text
  5. Sublimation and Summary (1-2 paragraphs): Extract insights and conclude powerfully
The total word count is usually 30%-50% of the original text, facilitating secondary dissemination.