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Vietnamese school and academic writing (vi-VN)

越南语学校与学术写作(vi-VN)

Vietnamese education writing fails by flattening a rigidly hierarchical, legally codified system into one generic voice. A teacher writing to a 9-year-old, a school broadcasting to parents, and a university registrar addressing an adult student are three different registers with three different pronouns — and two of the genres here (report-card language, diploma reissuance) use wording set by a Ministry circular, not by house style.
This skill covers instructional and administrative writing only. E-learning product UI, gamification, and subtitles belong to
vietnamese-tech-writing
; tutoring-centre, test-prep, and study-abroad advertising belong to
vietnamese-business-comms
— both are genuinely different registers (software microcopy, regulated advertising) wearing an education topic.
越南教育类写作的常见问题在于,将一个等级森严、有法律明文规定的体系简化为单一通用语气。教师写给9岁学生的内容、校方发给家长的通知、大学注册处写给成年学生的文件,分属三种不同的语体,使用三种不同的称呼——其中两类文体(成绩单用语、文凭补发)的措辞由教育部通告规定,而非机构自身的风格。
本技能仅涵盖教学及行政写作。在线学习产品UI、游戏化内容及字幕属于
vietnamese-tech-writing
范畴;辅导中心、备考及留学广告属于
vietnamese-business-comms
范畴——这两类虽涉及教育主题,但属于完全不同的语体(软件微文案、受监管的广告)。

Step 1 — Identify the writer, the reader, and the schooling stage

步骤1 — 明确撰写者、阅读者及教育阶段

Writer → ReaderRegisterNotes
Teacher → secondary student (THCS/THPT)
edu-k12
(
em
)
The default K-12 classroom register
Teacher → primary student (tiểu học)
edu-k12-primary
(
con
)
Set by schooling stage, not the student's actual age
School/teacher → parents (collective)
edu-parent
(
quý phụ huynh
)
sổ liên lạc, Zalo broadcasts, report-card notices
University → student (administrative prose)
edu-uni
(no direct address)
Transcripts, syllabi, registration — third-person
sinh viên
bạn
addressed to a student in a teacher's voice is the single most common machine-translation tell in this domain — it strips the hierarchical respect the relationship requires. Full matrix, including how these four rows sit alongside every other Vietnamese skill's registers: references/register-matrix.md. The education-specific detail — the primary/secondary
con
/
em
line,
quý phụ huynh
versus a known parent's own register, and a teacher's self-reference (
thầy
/
, never
tôi
) — is in references/doc-registers.md.
撰写者 → 阅读者语体标识说明
教师 → 中学生(THCS/THPT)
edu-k12
(使用
em
K-12课堂默认语体
教师 → 小学生(tiểu học)
edu-k12-primary
(使用
con
由教育阶段决定,而非学生实际年龄
学校/教师 → 家长(群体)
edu-parent
(使用
quý phụ huynh
适用于sổ liên lạc(家校联系册)、Zalo通知、成绩单告知
大学 → 学生(行政文书)
edu-uni
(无直接称呼)
成绩单、课程大纲、注册文件——使用第三人称
sinh viên
教师用
bạn
称呼学生是该领域机器翻译最明显的特征——这会消解师生关系所需的等级尊重。完整的语体矩阵,包括这四类语体与其他越南语技能语体的对应关系,请查看:references/register-matrix.md。教育领域的特定细节——小学/中学阶段的
con
/
em
区分、
quý phụ huynh
与针对特定家长的语体差异、教师的自称(
thầy
/
,绝不能用
tôi
)——请查看:references/doc-registers.md

Step 2 — Use the statutory grading terms, not the ones that sound right

步骤2 — 使用法定评分术语,而非看似合理的表述

Grading and credential terminology in Vietnam is set by Bộ GD&ĐT circulars, and they changed recently enough that an LLM's training data still defaults to the abolished terms:
  • Secondary (THCS/THPT), Thông tư 22/2021/TT-BGDĐT: overall classification is
    Tốt
    /
    Khá
    /
    Đạt
    /
    Chưa đạt
    .
    Học sinh Tiên tiến
    and an overall
    Giỏi
    /
    Trung bình
    label are abolished — generating them is the clearest tell that a report card is machine-written.
  • Primary (tiểu học), Thông tư 27/2020/TT-BGDĐT: routine assessment is qualitative, not numeric —
    Hoàn thành tốt
    /
    Hoàn thành
    /
    Cần cố gắng
    .
    Cần cải thiện
    is the calque; the statutory phrase is
    Cần cố gắng
    .
  • Higher education, Thông tư 08/2021/TT-BGDĐT: credit is
    tín chỉ
    , never
    tín dụng
    (that is financial credit). GPA is written with a Vietnamese decimal comma (
    3,6/4,0
    ), and maps to
    Xuất sắc
    /
    Giỏi
    /
    Khá
    — an untranslated
    3.6/4.0
    is a locale bug, not a style choice.
  • Diplomas, Thông tư 21/2019/TT-BGDĐT: an original diploma is issued once. A lost diploma is never "reissued as an original" — the correct, and only legal, output is
    cấp bản sao từ sổ gốc
    (a copy from the master register).
Full tables, article citations, and effective dates: references/grading-terminology.md.
越南的评分及学历术语由Bộ GD&ĐT(越南教育部)的通告规定,且近期有更新,因此大语言模型的训练数据仍会默认使用已废止的术语:
  • 中学(THCS/THPT),Thông tư 22/2021/TT-BGDĐT: 整体评级为
    Tốt
    /
    Khá
    /
    Đạt
    /
    Chưa đạt
    Học sinh Tiên tiến
    (优秀学生)及整体
    Giỏi
    /
    Trung bình
    (良好/中等)标签已废止——使用这些术语是成绩单为机器生成的最明显标志。
  • 小学(tiểu học),Thông tư 27/2020/TT-BGDĐT: 常规评估为定性描述,而非数字评分——
    Hoàn thành tốt
    (完成良好)/
    Hoàn thành
    (完成)/
    Cần cố gắng
    (需努力)。
    Cần cải thiện
    (需改进)是直译错误,法定表述为
    Cần cố gắng
  • 高等教育,Thông tư 08/2021/TT-BGDĐT: 学分是
    tín chỉ
    ,绝不能用
    tín dụng
    (该词指金融信贷)。GPA需使用越南语的十进制逗号(
    3,6/4,0
    ),对应评级为
    Xuất sắc
    /
    Giỏi
    /
    Khá
    ——未转换的
    3.6/4.0
    属于区域设置错误,而非风格选择。
  • 文凭,Thông tư 21/2019/TT-BGDĐT: 原始文凭仅颁发一次。遗失的文凭绝不会“补发原件”——唯一合法的正确表述是
    cấp bản sao từ sổ gốc
    (从原始档案开具副本)。
完整的术语表、法规引用及生效日期,请查看:references/grading-terminology.md

Step 3 — Look up the term before inventing one

步骤3 — 先查证术语,勿自行创造

giáo trình
(textbook/course material) is not
đề cương
(syllabus/course outline);
đăng ký khóa học
is the EdTech phrase,
đăng ký học phần
is the university-registration one;
ăn cắp ý tưởng
is not the formal
đạo văn
(plagiarism). The calque table, with severities: references/glossary.md.
giáo trình
(教材/课程资料)不等于
đề cương
(课程大纲/教学计划);
đăng ký khóa học
是教育科技领域的表述,
đăng ký học phần
是大学注册的术语;
ăn cắp ý tưởng
不是正式的
đạo văn
(剽窃)。包含严重程度说明的直译错误对照表,请查看:references/glossary.md

Step 4 — Check compliance and formatting

步骤4 — 检查合规性与格式

quý phụ huynh
for parent-facing notices is close to a legal expectation, not just house style — Điều 89 Luật Giáo dục 2019 frames school-home communication as formal coordination, and a casual or literal
các bậc cha mẹ
reads as a failure to take that seriously. A K-12 app or portal that reports a child's grades to a parent is processing a minor's data and needs the consent language in references/compliance.md (Nghị định 13/2023/NĐ-CP). Number, date, and currency formatting (tuition fees, GPA decimals) follows references/locale-formatting.md; regulated superlatives in school-branding language follow references/banned-phrases.md.
面向家长的通知使用
quý phụ huynh
近乎法律要求,而非仅机构风格——《2019年教育法》第89条将家校沟通定义为正式协作,随意或直译的
các bậc cha mẹ
会被视为未严肃对待此事。向家长报告孩子成绩的K-12应用或平台属于处理未成年人数据,需使用**references/compliance.md中的同意话术(Nghị định 13/2023/NĐ-CP)。数字、日期及货币格式(学费、GPA小数)遵循references/locale-formatting.md;学校品牌语言中的受监管最高级表述遵循references/banned-phrases.md**。

Step 5 — Validate, fix, then ship

步骤5 — 验证、修正后再交付

Run the validator immediately after writing. If it reports errors, fix them and run again. Only present the copy once it passes.
bash
python scripts/validate_copy.py hoc-ba.md --doctype secondary-report-card
python scripts/validate_copy.py so-lien-lac.md --doctype primary-report-card --register edu-parent
python scripts/validate_copy.py nhan-xet.md --doctype teacher-to-student --register edu-k12
python scripts/validate_copy.py bang-diem.md --doctype transcript
python scripts/validate_copy.py cap-lai-bang.md --doctype diploma
python scripts/validate_copy.py de-cuong.md --doctype higher-ed --register edu-uni
  • --register edu-k12|edu-k12-primary|edu-parent|edu-uni
    enables
    PRO002
    .
  • --doctype
    turns on the statutory and structural rules
    — they stay silent otherwise, because
    Cần cải thiện
    is only wrong on a primary report card:
    primary-report-card
    ,
    secondary-report-card
    ,
    teacher-to-student
    ,
    transcript
    ,
    diploma
    ,
    higher-ed
    .
  • Exit
    0
    = clean or warnings only. Exit
    1
    = errors that must be fixed.
  • --json
    for machine-readable findings;
    --strict
    to fail on warnings too;
    --fix
    repairs NFC in place.
撰写完成后立即运行验证工具。若报告错误,修正后再次运行。仅在验证通过后提交文案。
bash
python scripts/validate_copy.py hoc-ba.md --doctype secondary-report-card
python scripts/validate_copy.py so-lien-lac.md --doctype primary-report-card --register edu-parent
python scripts/validate_copy.py nhan-xet.md --doctype teacher-to-student --register edu-k12
python scripts/validate_copy.py bang-diem.md --doctype transcript
python scripts/validate_copy.py cap-lai-bang.md --doctype diploma
python scripts/validate_copy.py de-cuong.md --doctype higher-ed --register edu-uni
  • --register edu-k12|edu-k12-primary|edu-parent|edu-uni
    启用
    PRO002
    规则。
  • --doctype
    会开启法定及结构规则
    ——否则这些规则不会生效,因为
    Cần cải thiện
    仅在小学成绩单中属于错误表述:可用的
    doctype
    包括
    primary-report-card
    secondary-report-card
    teacher-to-student
    transcript
    diploma
    higher-ed
  • 退出码
    0
    = 无错误或仅警告。退出码
    1
    = 必须修正的错误。
  • --json
    用于生成机器可读的检查结果;
    --strict
    会将警告视为错误;
    --fix
    会就地修复NFC编码问题。

Step 6 — Learn from the worked pairs, then hand it to a human

步骤6 — 参考示例,再交由人工审核

references/examples.md — bad→good pairs, each with the circular or article it fixes. Then run the checklist: the linter catches statutory terms, calques, and encoding; it cannot tell you whether a report-card remark is actually encouraging, or whether a parent notice reads as sincere. Those need a native speaker who has taught or parented inside this system: references/qa-checklist.md
references/examples.md——包含错误→修正的示例对,每个示例均标注了对应的法规条款。之后请运行检查清单:校验工具可检测法定术语、直译错误及编码问题,但无法判断成绩单评语是否具有鼓励性,或家长通知是否显得真诚。这些需要具备越南教育系统教学或育儿经验的母语人士审核:references/qa-checklist.md