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Wordy: "The results clearly demonstrate that the novel approach significantly outperforms existing methods"
Better: "The approach outperforms existing methods"
Complex: "The model—which incorporates multiple data sources; including case counts, hospitalisations, and genomic data—provides insights"
Better: "The model incorporates case counts, hospitalisations, and genomic data. It provides insights"
Passive: "It was found that the infection rate was increasing"
Active: "We found the infection rate increased"
Hedged: "It appears that the results seem to suggest that there might be a relationship"
Direct: "The results suggest a relationship"冗余表述："The results clearly demonstrate that the novel approach significantly outperforms existing methods"
优化后："The approach outperforms existing methods"
复杂句式："The model—which incorporates multiple data sources; including case counts, hospitalisations, and genomic data—provides insights"
优化后："The model incorporates case counts, hospitalisations, and genomic data. It provides insights"
被动语态："It was found that the infection rate was increasing"
主动语态："We found the infection rate increased"
模糊表述："It appears that the results seem to suggest that there might be a relationship"
直接表述："The results suggest a relationship"Avoid: "The model includes three components; case counts, delays, and reporting rates"
Better: "The model includes three components: case counts, delays, and reporting rates"
Or: "The model includes three components. These are case counts, delays, and reporting rates"Avoid: "The approach—which we developed over three years—shows promise"
Better: "The approach shows promise. We developed it over three years"Avoid: "The method, which incorporates data from multiple sources, including surveillance systems, which track cases daily, and laboratory reports, provides estimates"
Better: "The method incorporates data from surveillance systems and laboratory reports. It provides estimates"不推荐："The model includes three components; case counts, delays, and reporting rates"
推荐："The model includes three components: case counts, delays, and reporting rates"
或："The model includes three components. These are case counts, delays, and reporting rates"不推荐："The approach—which we developed over three years—shows promise"
推荐："The approach shows promise. We developed it over three years"不推荐："The method, which incorporates data from multiple sources, including surveillance systems, which track cases daily, and laboratory reports, provides estimates"
推荐："The method incorporates data from surveillance systems and laboratory reports. It provides estimates"[@author2024][@author2024; @other2023][@first2024; @second2024]@author2024 showed that...[@author2024][@author2024; @other2023][@first2024; @second2024]@author2024 showed that...[@placeholder][@TODO][@CITE]authorYearauthor_year[@placeholder][@TODO][@CITE]authorYearauthor_yearOriginal: "The model incorporates a hierarchical Bayesian structure with conjugate priors"
Poor: "The approach uses a hierarchical Bayesian framework with conjugate priors"Better: "We used Bayesian hierarchical modelling with conjugate prior distributions"原文："The model incorporates a hierarchical Bayesian structure with conjugate priors"
改写不佳："The approach uses a hierarchical Bayesian framework with conjugate priors"改写优化："We used Bayesian hierarchical modelling with conjugate prior distributions"Vague: "The model performed well"
Specific: "The model achieved 95% accuracy"
Vague: "We used a large dataset"
Specific: "We used a dataset of 10,000 cases"
Vague: "Results improved substantially"
Specific: "Accuracy improved from 80% to 92%"模糊："The model performed well"
具体："The model achieved 95% accuracy"
模糊："We used a large dataset"
具体："We used a dataset of 10,000 cases"
模糊："Results improved substantially"
具体："Accuracy improved from 80% to 92%"