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80/20 Conversion Message

80/20转化文案法

Use this skill to create sales messages that focus on urgent buyer problems, qualify the right prospects, and disqualify weak ones. It is based on 80/20 Sales and Marketing by Perry Marshall.
使用该技能创建聚焦客户紧急痛点、筛选精准潜在客户并排除非目标客户的销售文案。它基于Perry Marshall所著的《80/20销售与营销》。

Source Traceability

来源溯源

Primary source: 80/20 Sales and Marketing, chapter 7.
  • Chapter 7 covers conversion, buyer qualification, disqualification, urgent problem framing, and problem-agitate-solve messaging.
主要来源:《80/20销售与营销》第7章。
  • 第7章涵盖转化、客户筛选、非目标客户排除、紧急痛点构建以及‘痛点-激化-解决’式文案撰写。

Workflow

工作流程

1. Identify The Urgent Problem

1. 识别紧急痛点

Write the buyer's problem in their own language.
Capture:
  • Pain or risk.
  • Trigger event.
  • Cost of delay.
  • Current failed alternative.
  • Desired result.
Do not lead with product features. Lead with the problem the right buyer already cares about.
用客户的语言描述其痛点。
需捕捉:
  • 痛苦或风险。
  • 触发事件。
  • 延迟解决的代价。
  • 当前尝试过的无效方案。
  • 期望达成的结果。
切勿以产品功能开篇,应从精准客户已关注的痛点切入。

2. Apply The Five Qualification Filters

2. 应用五大筛选标准

Check whether the message attracts people who:
  • Have money.
  • Have urgent pain.
  • Believe the offer category or can be persuaded.
  • Can say yes.
  • Fit the broader plan or context.
If the message attracts unqualified leads, add clearer disqualification.
检查文案是否能吸引以下人群:
  • 具备购买力。
  • 存在紧急痛点。
  • 认可该产品类别,或可被说服。
  • 拥有决策权限。
  • 符合整体规划或场景。
若文案吸引了非精准客户,需添加更明确的排除条件。

3. Build The Message

3. 构建文案

Use this sequence:
  1. Problem: name the urgent situation.
  2. Agitate: make the cost, stakes, and consequences specific.
  3. Solve: show the outcome and why the offer fits.
  4. Qualify: state who this is and is not for.
  5. Action: ask for one measurable next step.
遵循以下步骤:
  1. 痛点:点明紧急状况。
  2. 激化:明确代价、风险和后果。
  3. 解决:展示成果,并说明产品为何适配。
  4. 筛选:说明目标客户与非目标客户群体。
  5. 行动:要求客户完成一个可衡量的下一步动作。

4. Define The Conversion Test

4. 定义转化测试方案

Recommend the smallest test that proves message quality:
  • Click-through from a qualified audience.
  • Form completion with disqualification fields.
  • Reply rate from a narrow list.
  • Sales call booking quality.
  • Purchase, deposit, or application.
推荐能验证文案质量的最小测试:
  • 精准受众的点击率。
  • 包含排除字段的表单完成率。
  • 精准名单的回复率。
  • 销售预约的质量。
  • 购买、定金支付或申请提交情况。

Output Format

输出格式

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Conversion Message

Conversion Message

Buyer Problem

Buyer Problem

  • Target buyer:
  • Urgent problem:
  • Cost of inaction:
  • Current alternative:
  • Target buyer:
  • Urgent problem:
  • Cost of inaction:
  • Current alternative:

Qualification Filters

Qualification Filters

FilterMessage ElementPass/Concern
Money
Urgency
Belief
Authority
Fit
FilterMessage ElementPass/Concern
Money
Urgency
Belief
Authority
Fit

Message Draft

Message Draft

  • Headline:
  • Agitation:
  • Solution:
  • Disqualification:
  • CTA:
  • Headline:
  • Agitation:
  • Solution:
  • Disqualification:
  • CTA:

Test Plan

Test Plan

  • Audience:
  • Metric:
  • Success threshold:
  • Kill threshold:
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  • Audience:
  • Metric:
  • Success threshold:
  • Kill threshold:
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Quality Bar

质量标准

  • Do not write generic benefit copy.
  • Do not optimize tone before qualifying the buyer.
  • Do not hide disqualification criteria.
  • Make the cost of inaction concrete.
  • Measure qualified response, not raw response.
  • 请勿撰写通用型利益文案。
  • 在完成客户筛选前,不要优化文案语气。
  • 不要隐藏非目标客户排除标准。
  • 明确不作为的代价。
  • 衡量精准客户响应,而非原始响应数据。