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thesis-polish — MBA 论文全面润色

thesis-polish — Comprehensive Polishing for MBA Theses

将 MBA 论文从初稿提升至全国优秀论文水准。涵盖语言润色、结构优化、论证强化、创新点凸显四个维度。
Elevate your MBA thesis from draft to the standard of National Excellent Thesis. It covers four dimensions: language polishing, structure optimization, argumentation enhancement, and highlighting of innovative points.

When to Use

When to Use

  • 用户提供 MBA 论文（markdown 格式）需要润色
  • 用户想让论文达到全国优秀论文标准
  • 用户需要学术写作的全面提升
  • When the user provides an MBA thesis (in Markdown format) that needs polishing
  • When the user wants their thesis to meet the standard of National Excellent Thesis
  • When the user needs comprehensive improvement in academic writing

Workflow (MANDATORY)

Workflow (MANDATORY)

Step 1: 接收论文

Step 1: Receive the Thesis

读取用户提供的论文文件（markdown 格式）。如果用户给的是文件路径，用 Read 工具读取。
Read the thesis file provided by the user (in Markdown format). If the user provides a file path, use the Read tool to access it.

Step 2: 诊断评估

Step 2: Diagnostic Evaluation

通读全文后，先输出一份诊断报告（不超过 300 字），包含：
维度当前水平主要问题提升方向
语言表达A/B/C......
论证逻辑A/B/C......
结构布局A/B/C......
创新贡献A/B/C......
文献运用A/B/C......
After reading the full text, first output a diagnostic report (no more than 300 words) including the following:
DimensionCurrent LevelKey IssuesImprovement Directions
Language ExpressionA/B/C......
Argumentation LogicA/B/C......
Structure and LayoutA/B/C......
Innovative ContributionA/B/C......
Literature ApplicationA/B/C......

Step 3: 确认润色策略

Step 3: Confirm Polishing Strategy

Use 
AskUserQuestion
to confirm strategy BEFORE polishing.
向用户展示诊断报告后，询问：
  • 是否同意诊断？有无特殊要求？
  • 论文的核心创新点是什么？（帮助 AI 更好地凸显）
  • 是否有目标期刊/评审标准的特殊要求？
Use 
AskUserQuestion
to confirm strategy BEFORE polishing.
After presenting the diagnostic report to the user, ask the following questions:
  • Do you agree with the diagnosis? Are there any special requirements?
  • What are the core innovative points of the thesis? (Helps the AI better highlight them)
  • Are there any special requirements from target journals or evaluation criteria?

Step 4: 逐章润色

Step 4: Chapter-by-Chapter Polishing

按章节逐一润色，每章输出完整的润色后文本。润色时严格遵循以下标准：
Polish each chapter one by one, and output the complete polished text for each chapter. Strictly follow the following standards during polishing:

4.1 语言表达标准

4.1 Language Expression Standards

  • 学术用语：口语化表达 → 学术规范用语（"很多" → "大量/众多"，"觉得" → "认为/表明"）
  • 句式升级：简单句 → 复合句，增加因果、转折、递进的逻辑连接
  • 术语一致：全文术语统一，首次出现标注英文原文
  • 量化表达：模糊描述 → 精确数据/比例/引用支撑
  • 被动与主动：研究方法部分多用被动语态，讨论部分主动论述
  • Academic Terminology: Replace colloquial expressions with standardized academic terms (e.g., "many" → "a large number of", "think" → "argue/indicate")
  • Sentence Structure Upgrade: Convert simple sentences to complex sentences, adding logical connectors for cause-effect, transition, and progression
  • Term Consistency: Maintain consistent terminology throughout the text, with English original marked upon first appearance
  • Quantitative Expression: Replace vague descriptions with precise data, proportions, or citation support
  • Passive vs. Active Voice: Use passive voice more in research methodology sections, and active voice for discussions

4.2 论证逻辑标准

4.2 Argumentation Logic Standards

  • 论点-论据-论证：每个观点必须有数据/文献/案例支撑
  • 逻辑链条：前后段落之间有明确的逻辑递进关系
  • 反驳预设：对可能的质疑提前回应（"尽管...但..."）
  • 对比论证：与已有研究对比，凸显本文贡献
  • 因果严谨：区分相关性与因果性，避免过度推断
  • Thesis-Evidence-Argumentation: Each viewpoint must be supported by data, literature, or cases
  • Logical Chain: Clear logical progression between consecutive paragraphs
  • Preempt Refutations: Address potential counterarguments in advance (e.g., "Although... however...")
  • Comparative Argumentation: Compare with existing research to highlight the contribution of this thesis
  • Rigorous Causality: Distinguish between correlation and causality, avoid over-inference

4.3 结构布局标准

4.3 Structure and Layout Standards

  • 章节衔接：每章开头有承上启下的过渡段
  • 段落结构：主题句 → 展开 → 小结，每段聚焦一个论点
  • 层次清晰：一级标题（章）→ 二级标题（节）→ 三级标题（小节），层级不超过三级
  • 摘要提升：摘要涵盖研究背景、目的、方法、发现、贡献五要素
  • Chapter Cohesion: Each chapter starts with a transitional paragraph connecting the previous and current content
  • Paragraph Structure: Topic sentence → expansion → summary, each paragraph focuses on one thesis
  • Clear Hierarchy: Level 1 heading (chapter) → Level 2 heading (section) → Level 3 heading (subsection), with no more than three levels
  • Abstract Enhancement: The abstract should cover five elements: research background, purpose, methodology, findings, and contributions

4.4 创新贡献标准

4.4 Innovative Contribution Standards

  • 显式标注：在引言和结论中明确列出 2-3 个创新点
  • 差异化表述：用 "区别于已有研究...本文首次/创新性地..." 句式
  • 理论贡献：说明对理论框架的扩展或修正
  • 实践意义：说明对管理实践的具体指导价值
  • Explicit Labeling: Clearly list 2-3 innovative points in the introduction and conclusion
  • Differentiated Expression: Use phrases like "Different from existing research... this thesis is the first to/innovatively..."
  • Theoretical Contribution: Explain the expansion or revision of the theoretical framework
  • Practical Significance: Illustrate specific guiding value for management practice

4.5 文献运用标准

4.5 Literature Application Standards

  • 权威性：优先引用 SSCI/CSSCI 期刊、经典著作
  • 时效性：近 5 年文献占比不低于 60%
  • 对话感：不只是罗列文献，而是与文献"对话"（"XXX(2023)指出...，本文在此基础上进一步发现..."）
  • 文献综述：按主题/流派组织，而非按时间堆砌
  • Authoritativeness: Prioritize citations from SSCI/CSSCI journals and classic works
  • Timeliness: No less than 60% of references should be from the past 5 years
  • Dialogue Sense: Instead of just listing literature, engage in "dialogue" with it (e.g., "XXX (2023) pointed out..., this thesis further finds on this basis...")
  • Literature Review: Organize by theme/school of thought rather than chronological order

Step 5: 输出

Step 5: Output

将所有润色后的章节合并，输出完整的润色后全文（markdown 格式）。
如果用户需要保存为文件，使用 Write 工具写入，文件名遵循： 
手工川-mba-thesis-polished-{YYYY-MM-DD}-v0.1.md
Combine all polished chapters and output the complete polished full text (in Markdown format).
If the user needs to save it as a file, use the Write tool to write it, following the file name format: 
手工川-mba-thesis-polished-{YYYY-MM-DD}-v0.1.md

Important Notes

Important Notes

  • 不篡改数据：润色仅涉及表达和论证方式，不编造数据或虚构引用
  • 保留原意：所有修改必须忠实于作者原意，不改变研究结论
  • 标注建议：如果某处论证薄弱需要作者补充数据/文献，用 
    [建议补充: ...]
    标注
  • 分批处理：论文通常很长，按章节分批润色，避免遗漏
  • No Data Tampering: Polishing only involves expression and argumentation methods; do not fabricate data or citations
  • Preserve Original Meaning: All modifications must be faithful to the author's original intent and must not alter research conclusions
  • Mark Suggestions: If an argument is weak and requires the author to supplement data or literature, mark it with 
    [Suggestion to supplement: ...]
  • Batch Processing: Theses are usually long; polish them in batches by chapter to avoid omissions