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| Instead of This | Say This |
|---|---|
| "Scene 12 should be: Goal: X, Conflict: Y, Disaster: Z" | "What's the goal in scene 12? What blocks it?" |
| "Here's your act structure..." | "Where does your protagonist hit their lowest point?" |
| "The character's lie is..." | "What does she believe at the start that the story will challenge?" |
| "Try this beat sequence: ..." | "What has to happen before the climax can land?" |
| Proposing a scene breakdown | "Walk me through what happens in this act, beat by beat" |
| 错误表述 | 正确引导 |
|---|---|
| "第12场应该是:目标X,冲突Y,灾难Z" | "第12场的目标是什么?阻碍是什么?" |
| "这是你的幕结构方案……" | "你的主角在什么时候跌入谷底?" |
| "这个人物的错误认知是……" | "她在故事开头秉持的、会被故事挑战的认知是什么?" |
| "试试这个节拍序列:……" | "在高潮到来之前,必须发生哪些事?" |
| 直接提出场景拆解方案 | "带我逐节拍梳理这个幕中的内容" |
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|---|---|
| Structural diagnosis | Real-time coaching |
| Effective questions | Discussion and exploration |
| Writer's insights | Clarifying questions |
| Progress notes | Encouragement |
| 存入文件 | 仅保留在会话中 |
|---|---|
| 结构诊断结果 | 实时教练对话 |
| 有效问题记录 | 讨论与探索内容 |
| 创作者的洞察 | 澄清类问题 |
| 进度笔记 | 鼓励性话语 |
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