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Write Cold Email

撰写开发信

Generate a cold email that gets responses using proven copywriting frameworks.
使用经过验证的文案框架生成能获得回复的开发信。

Input

输入

Parse $ARGUMENTS for:
  • Target: Who they're emailing (role, company, industry)
  • Goal: What they want (meeting, intro, feedback, sale)
  • Context: Personalization hooks (mutual connection, recent news, specific pain point)
If arguments are incomplete, ask for the missing pieces.
解析$ARGUMENTS以获取：
  • 目标对象：收件人的职位、公司、行业
  • 目标：你的诉求（约见、引荐、反馈、销售）
  • 背景信息：个性化切入点（共同联系人、近期动态、具体痛点）
若参数不完整，请询问缺失的信息。

Frameworks (Choose the best fit)

框架（选择最适配的一种）

AIDA (Awareness → Interest → Desire → Action)

AIDA（认知→兴趣→渴望→行动）

  • Hook with relevance
  • Build interest with value
  • Create desire with proof/benefit
  • Clear CTA
  • 用相关性内容作为钩子
  • 通过价值点建立兴趣
  • 用案例/收益激发渴望
  • 清晰的行动号召（CTA）

PAS (Problem → Agitate → Solution)

PAS（问题→激化→解决方案）

  • Identify their problem
  • Make it feel urgent
  • Position as the solution
  • 指出对方的问题
  • 增强问题的迫切性
  • 将自身定位为解决方案

BAB (Before → After → Bridge)

BAB（过去→未来→桥梁）

  • Their current state (problem)
  • Their ideal state (outcome)
  • How you bridge the gap
  • 对方当前状态（问题）
  • 对方理想状态（成果）
  • 说明你如何填补差距

Hard Rules

硬性规则

  1. 50-125 words - Shorter emails get more replies
  2. Subject line: 3-5 words, lowercase, no clickbait
  3. First line: Personalized - reference something specific about them
  4. No fluff: Cut "I hope this email finds you well", "My name is...", "I wanted to reach out"
  5. One CTA: Single, specific ask (not "let me know if you're interested")
  6. Read time: Under 30 seconds
  7. Mobile-friendly: Short paragraphs, no walls of text
  1. 50-125词 - 更短的邮件获得更多回复
  2. 主题行：3-5词，小写，无标题党
  3. 第一行：个性化内容 - 提及与对方相关的具体信息
  4. 无冗余内容：删除“希望你一切安好”“我叫...”“我想联系你”这类套话
  5. 单一行动号召：明确、具体的诉求（而非“若有兴趣请告知我”）
  6. 阅读时长：30秒以内
  7. 移动端友好：短段落，无大段文字墙

What Makes It Human

人性化要点

  • Sounds like a real person, not a template
  • Has a specific reason for emailing THIS person
  • Shows you did research
  • Doesn't oversell or use hype words
  • Has a clear "what's in it for them"
  • 语气像真实的人，而非模板
  • 有联系这位特定收件人的具体理由
  • 体现你做过调研
  • 不过度推销或使用夸张词汇
  • 清晰说明“对他们有什么好处”

Output Format

输出格式

Subject: [subject line]

[Email body]

[First name only]
Framework used: [which one and why] Personalization: [what angle you used] Word count: [number]
Subject: [subject line]

[Email body]

[First name only]
使用的框架：[具体框架及原因] 个性化内容：[使用的切入点] 词数：[具体数字]