cw-tracks
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ChineseTracks
写作痕迹检查
Purpose
用途
Find where the writing shows its tracks. Annie Dillard: "Process is nothing; erase your tracks." This skill hunts for the scaffolding still visible in a draft—the exploratory thinking, the arrival sequences, the "how I got here" that helped the writer but slows the reader.
Use this when:
- A draft reads like a journey log instead of a destination
- You can see the writer thinking on the page
- Sections narrate the process of figuring something out rather than presenting what was found
- The piece feels like it's warming up for too long before it arrives
- You've revised heavily and want to check for leftover scaffolding
找出写作中留下的过程痕迹。安妮·迪拉德（Annie Dillard）曾说：「过程无足轻重；擦掉你的痕迹。」本技能用于查找草稿中仍然可见的「脚手架」内容——包括探索性思考、抵达式段落、以及「我是如何得出结论的」这类对作者有帮助、但会拖慢读者节奏的内容。
适用场景：
- 草稿读起来像旅行日志，而非最终成果
- 你能在页面上感受到作者的思考过程
- 部分章节在叙述「搞懂某件事的过程」，而非呈现最终结论
- 文章铺垫过久，迟迟进入不了正题
- 你已经完成大量修改，想检查是否还有残留的脚手架内容
Invocation
调用方式
- — Find the tracks in the provided text
/cw-tracks [text] - — System asks "What needs its tracks erased?"
/cw-tracks - Works on selection if provided, asks if not
- — 查找指定文本中的写作痕迹
/cw-tracks [文本] - — 系统会询问「需要擦掉哪些写作痕迹？」
/cw-tracks - 支持对选中文本执行操作，未选中时会提示输入
Track Types
痕迹类型
| Track | What It Looks Like | Why It Should Go |
|---|---|---|
| The Arrival Sequence | "After much research, I realized..." "It took me a while to see that..." | The reader doesn't need your travel itinerary. Start where you landed. |
| The Scaffolding | Transitional paragraphs that connect old thinking to new thinking. | These helped you build the argument. The argument can stand without them now. |
| The Thinking-Out-Loud | "What if we consider..." "One might wonder..." "This raises the question..." | You already answered the question. Just give the answer. |
| The Hedge Trail | "It seems like," "I think," "perhaps," "it's possible that" — accumulated over drafts. | Hedges multiply during revision. Most can go once you know what you believe. |
| The Deleted Argument's Ghost | A rebuttal to a point no longer in the piece. A transition to a section that was cut. | Old structure leaves phantom limbs. Find and amputate them. |
| The Discovery Narration | "I didn't expect to find..." "Surprisingly..." "What I learned was..." | The reader experiences discovery through the idea itself, not through being told you discovered it. |
| The Warm-Up | First 1-3 paragraphs that exist because the writer needed a running start. | Your real opening is buried somewhere in paragraph 3 or 4. |
| The Belt-and-Suspenders | Making the same point twice in different words, because you weren't sure the first version landed. | Trust your first swing. If it didn't land, fix it—don't repeat it. |
| 痕迹类型 | 表现形式 | 为何需要删除 |
|---|---|---|
| 抵达式段落 | 「经过大量研究，我意识到……」「我花了很久才明白……」 | 读者不需要你的旅行行程，从你抵达的地方开始写就好。 |
| 脚手架内容 | 连接旧思路与新思路的过渡段落 | 这些内容帮你搭建了论证，如今论证已能独立成立，不再需要它们。 |
| 出声思考式内容 | 「如果我们考虑……会怎样？」「有人可能会疑惑……」「这引出了一个问题……」 | 你已经回答了这个问题，直接给出答案即可。 |
| 模糊措辞痕迹 | 「似乎」「我认为」「也许」「有可能」这类在草稿中不断累积的表述 | 修改过程中会堆积大量模糊措辞，一旦明确了核心观点，大部分都可以删掉。 |
| 已删论点的幽灵 | 对已经不在文中的观点的反驳，或是指向已被删除章节的过渡 | 旧结构会留下「幻肢」，需要找到并切除。 |
| 发现式叙述 | 「我没料到会发现……」「出人意料的是……」「我学到的是……」 | 读者会通过观点本身感受到发现的惊喜，不需要你特意告知你的发现过程。 |
| 热身铺垫 | 前1-3段，它们存在只是因为作者需要热身才能进入写作状态 | 你真正的开头藏在第3或第4段的某个位置。 |
| 双重保险式重复 | 用不同的表述重复同一个观点，因为你不确定第一版有没有讲清楚 | 相信你的第一次表达，如果没讲清楚就修改它，而不是重复。 |
The Dillard Test
迪拉德测试
For every passage, ask:
- Is this here for the reader or for the writer?
- Does this describe the process of thinking, or the thought itself?
- If I cut this, would the argument still stand?
- Is this the destination, or the road I took to get there?
If the passage is road, not destination—erase the track.
对于每一段内容，问问自己：
- 这段内容是为读者服务的，还是为作者自己服务的？
- 这段是在描述思考的过程，还是在呈现思考的结果？
- 如果我删掉这段，论证还能成立吗？
- 这是最终的目的地，还是我抵达目的地走的路？
如果这段是路，而非目的地——就擦掉这个痕迹。
Output Format
输出格式
undefinedundefinedTrack Report
Track Report
Tracks found: [count]
Severity: [Light — a few fingerprints / Moderate — scaffolding visible / Heavy — the draft reads like a process log]
Tracks found: [count]
Severity: [Light — a few fingerprints / Moderate — scaffolding visible / Heavy — the draft reads like a process log]
The Tracks
The Tracks
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[Track type] — [Location/quote] Why it's showing: [Brief explanation] Erase it by: [Specific suggestion]
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[Track type] — [Location/quote] Why it's showing: [Brief explanation] Erase it by: [Specific suggestion]
[Continue for each track found]
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[Track type] — [Location/quote] Why it's showing: [Brief explanation] Erase it by: [Specific suggestion]
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[Track type] — [Location/quote] Why it's showing: [Brief explanation] Erase it by: [Specific suggestion]
[Continue for each track found]
The Warm-Up Check
The Warm-Up Check
Does the real piece start where the draft starts?
[Yes / No — the piece actually begins at: "[quote from where the real opening lives]"]
Does the real piece start where the draft starts?
[Yes / No — the piece actually begins at: "[quote from where the real opening lives]"]
The Clean Version
The Clean Version
[Rewrite of the most track-heavy section with tracks erased]
What changed:
- [How erasing tracks improved the passage]
Is the path clear now, or are there tracks I missed?
undefined[Rewrite of the most track-heavy section with tracks erased]
What changed:
- [How erasing tracks improved the passage]
Is the path clear now, or are there tracks I missed?
undefinedPrinciples
原则
- Process is nothing; erase your tracks — The reader should experience the destination, not the journey you took to find it.
- The writer's discovery is not the reader's discovery — You found the insight by wandering. The reader should find it by being led.
- Scaffolding is for building, not for living in — Once the structure stands, take down the scaffolding.
- Trust arrival — If you've arrived at a strong point, you don't need to narrate the arrival.
- Revision leaves residue — Every round of revision can leave traces of earlier versions. The last pass should clean the glass.
- 过程无足轻重；擦掉你的痕迹 —— 读者应该体验的是最终成果，而非你寻找成果的过程。
- 作者的发现不等于读者的发现 —— 你通过漫游找到洞见，而读者应该通过引导获得洞见。
- 脚手架是用来搭建的，不是用来住的 —— 结构一旦搭好，就拆掉脚手架。
- 相信抵达的状态 —— 如果你已经得出了有力的观点，就不需要叙述抵达的过程。
- 修改会留下残留 —— 每一轮修改都可能留下早期版本的痕迹，最后一遍检查要把玻璃擦干净。
The Box Canyon
箱形峡谷之喻
Dillard describes writing as following a path into a box canyon—you dispatch reports from new territory. The reports are the writing. The path you took to get there is not. If your draft reads like a trail map, you're publishing the wrong thing.
迪拉德把写作描述为沿着一条路走进箱形峡谷——你从新领地发回的报道就是写作本身，而你走过去的那条路不是。如果你的草稿读起来像路线图，那你发表的内容就错了。
Lessons
经验总结
[Skill-specific lessons will be added here as they're captured]
[后续会补充本技能相关的具体经验]