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Core principle: Write for the ear, not just the eyes. Prose should be suitable to read out loud.

核心原则：为听觉写作，而非仅为视觉。散文内容需适合大声朗读。

Read it out loud. If it:

大声朗读内容。如果它：

Patterns that scream "AI wrote this":

Bold formatting everywhere: Never bold section headers in body content
Bullet list everything: Convert to flowing paragraphs when possible
Marketing words: "game-changing", "revolutionary", "unleash", "empower"
Structured sections: "Key Features:", "Benefits:", "Why This Matters:"
Vague superlatives: "incredibly powerful", "seamlessly integrates"
Dramatic hyperbole: "feels like an eternity", "pain point", "excruciating" — use facts instead
AI adjectives: "perfectly", "effortlessly", "beautifully", "elegantly"
Space-hyphen-space: "The code works - the tests pass"
Overusing fragments: "Every. Single. Time." (once is emphasis, twice is a pattern)
Staccato buildup: Setup. Fragment. Fragment. Fragment. Punchline. This "dramatic reveal" pattern feels manufactured. Combine into one flowing sentence with em dashes or semicolons instead.
Forced specificity: Random numbers that don't add meaning

以下模式会暴露“这是AI写的”：

Never use " - " (space-hyphen-space) or " — " (space-em-dash-space). Prefer simpler punctuation:

Prefer	When
Period (.)	Default choice. Two sentences are often clearer than one.
Colon (:)	Introducing explanation: "Here's the thing: it doesn't work"
Semicolon (;)	Related independent clauses: "The code works; the tests pass"
Em dash (—)	Sparingly, for interruption or emphasis: "It's fast—really fast"

Em dashes are fine but easy to overuse. When in doubt, use a period.

绝不要使用“ - ”（空格-连字符-空格）或“ — ”（空格-破折号-空格）。优先使用更简洁的标点：

破折号可以使用，但容易被滥用。拿不准的时候，就用句号。

When the user provides example text or tone guidance, match it:

当用户提供示例文本或语气指导时，要匹配其风格：