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ChineseCold Outreach Sequence
陌生开发信序列
Here's what I've learned about cold outreach: the word "cold" is the problem.
If you're sending messages to strangers who've never heard of you, with templates you copied from some guru — yeah, that's cold. And it doesn't work.
But if you've done even 10 minutes of research, found something specific about them, and have a genuine reason to reach out? That's not cold. That's just... reaching out.
This skill helps you do the second thing.
关于陌生开发信,我有个领悟:问题就出在“陌生”这两个字上。
如果你给从没听说过你的陌生人发消息,用的还是从某个“大师”那里抄来的模板——那确实是“陌生”开发,而且完全没用。
但如果你哪怕花10分钟做了调研,找到了关于对方的具体信息,并且有一个真诚的联系理由?那这就不是“陌生”开发了,只是正常的建立联系而已。
这个技能就是帮你做到第二种情况。
Before You Write a Single Message
在发送第一条消息之前
The research is the work. Skip it and you'll sound like everyone else in their inbox.
For each prospect, find:
- Recent news — Funding, launches, hires, press
- What they're posting about — Their content tells you what they care about
- Their likely pain — Given their role and stage, what's keeping them up?
- Your connection point — What can you genuinely comment on?
Where to look:
- Their LinkedIn activity (posts, comments, shares)
- Company news (Crunchbase, TechCrunch, press releases)
- Their website (about page, blog, careers)
- Podcasts they've appeared on
Time investment: 10-15 minutes per high-value prospect.
This is what separates you from spam.
调研才是核心工作。跳过这一步,你在收件箱里就会和其他人没什么区别。
针对每个潜在客户,你需要找到:
- 近期动态——融资、产品发布、招聘、媒体报道
- 他们的发文内容——他们分享的内容能体现他们关注的方向
- 他们可能的痛点——结合他们的职位和公司阶段,什么问题会让他们头疼?
- 你的关联点——你能真诚地对什么内容发表看法?
调研渠道:
- 他们的LinkedIn动态(发文、评论、分享)
- 公司动态(Crunchbase、TechCrunch、新闻稿)
- 公司官网(关于我们、博客、招聘页面)
- 他们参与过的播客
时间投入: 每个高价值潜在客户投入10-15分钟。
这就是你和垃圾邮件的区别。
The Connection Request (LinkedIn)
LinkedIn连接请求
You have 300 characters. Don't waste them on a pitch.
The formula:
[Specific observation] + [Simple reason to connect]
Examples:
"Following [Company]'s growth — the [specific thing] is smart positioning. Would love to connect."
"[Their recent post] resonated. Been thinking about the same thing. Happy to connect."
"Congrats on [news]. Impressive trajectory."
The rules:
- No pitching. At all.
- Be specific (prove you looked)
- Keep it human
- No "I'd love to pick your brain"
你只有300字符的空间,别浪费在推销上。
公式:
[具体观察] + [简单的连接理由]
示例:
“关注着[公司]的发展——[具体举措]是非常明智的定位。希望能和你建立连接。”
“你最近的[发文]引起了我的共鸣。我也一直在思考同样的问题。很高兴能和你连接。”
“恭喜[近期动态]。发展势头令人印象深刻。”
规则:
- 绝对不要推销。
- 内容要具体(证明你做过调研)
- 语气要人性化
- 别说“我想向你请教”
First Message (After They Accept)
第一条消息(对方通过请求后)
Wait 24-48 hours. Then:
The formula:
[Thanks] + [Bridge to relevance] + [Light value] + [Soft question]
Example:
Thanks for connecting. I've been working at the intersection of [relevant area] — [one-line credibility].Curious if you have someone owning [relevant function] as you scale, or if that's still founder-led?Either way, happy to share what I'm seeing work in the space.
The rules:
- Still not a hard pitch
- Demonstrate relevance, not desperation
- Ask a question that invites dialogue
- Offer value without strings attached
等待24-48小时,然后发送:
公式:
[感谢语] + [关联到自身的切入点] + [轻度价值输出] + [软性问题]
示例:
感谢通过我的连接请求。我一直在[相关领域]深耕——[一句话个人背书]。好奇你们在扩张过程中,是否有专人负责[相关业务],还是仍由创始人亲自牵头?无论情况如何,我都很乐意分享这个领域里我看到的有效做法。
规则:
- 仍然不要硬推销
- 体现关联性,而非迫切性
- 提出能引发对话的问题
- 无条件提供价值
First Follow-Up (If No Response)
第一次跟进(未收到回复时)
Wait 5-7 days. Then:
The formula:
[Light nudge] + [New value or angle] + [Easy out]
Example:
Bumping this up — know you're slammed. Came across [relevant thing] and thought of your situation at [Company]. Worth a look if helpful.
Or:
Following up — been seeing [trend] hit companies at your stage. Happy to share what's working if useful. If not, no worries.
The rules:
- Don't just say "following up"
- Add something new
- Give them an easy out (takes the pressure off)
等待5-7天,然后发送:
公式:
[轻度提醒] + [新的价值或视角] + [给对方台阶]
示例:
再打扰一下——知道你肯定很忙。我看到了[相关内容],立刻想到了你在[公司]的处境。如果有用的话可以看看。
或者:
跟进一下——我发现[行业趋势]正影响着和你们同阶段的公司。如果有用的话,我很乐意分享有效的应对方法。如果不需要也没关系。
规则:
- 别只说“跟进一下”
- 要添加新的内容
- 给对方台阶下(减轻压力)
The Break-Up (Final Attempt)
收尾消息(最后尝试)
Wait 7-10 days. Then move on gracefully:
Example:
I'll assume timing isn't right — totally get it. If [relevant pain point] becomes a priority down the road, happy to reconnect. Best of luck with [specific thing they're working on].
The rules:
- No guilt trips
- No "just checking in one last time"
- Leave with class
- They may come back later
等待7-10天,然后体面地结束:
示例:
我猜现在时机不太合适——完全理解。如果未来[相关痛点]成为你的优先事项,欢迎再联系。祝[他们正在做的具体事情]一切顺利。
规则:
- 不要道德绑架
- 别说“最后再确认一次”
- 体面收尾
- 他们以后可能会主动联系你
Email Version
邮件版本
Same principles, different format.
Subject lines that work:
- "[Company]'s marketing as you scale"
- "Saw your [post/news] — quick thought"
- "[Mutual connection] suggested I reach out"
- "Question about [specific thing they're doing]"
Structure:
[1-line hook tied to them]
[2-3 sentences: why you're reaching out + relevance]
[1 sentence: soft CTA]
[Simple signature]Example:
Subject: [Company]'s GTM as you scale
Hey [Name],
Saw the [news] — congrats. [One specific observation].
I work with growth-stage companies on [relevant thing]. Helped [similar company] with [specific result].
Worth a quick chat to see if there's a fit?
[Your name]原则相同,格式不同。
有效的主题:
- “[公司]扩张期的营销策略”
- “看到你的[发文/动态]——一点想法”
- “[共同联系人]建议我联系你”
- “关于[他们正在做的具体事]的疑问”
结构:
[与对方相关的一句话钩子]
[2-3句话:联系理由+关联性]
[1句话:软性行动号召]
[简洁签名]示例:
主题:[公司]扩张期的GTM策略
嗨[姓名],
看到了[动态]——恭喜。[一个具体的观察]。
我为成长期公司提供[相关服务]。曾帮助[类似公司]取得了[具体成果]。
要不要简单聊一下看看是否匹配?
[你的名字]The Full Sequence Calendar
完整序列日程表
| Day | Action | Platform |
|---|---|---|
| 0 | Research + Connection request | |
| 1-2 | Accept → Wait 24h → First message | |
| 7 | Follow-up #1 | |
| 14 | Follow-up #2 or try email | LinkedIn/Email |
| 21 | Break-up message | Same |
| 天数 | 行动 | 平台 |
|---|---|---|
| 0 | 调研 + 发送连接请求 | |
| 1-2 | 对方通过请求 → 等待24小时 → 发送第一条消息 | |
| 7 | 第一次跟进 | |
| 14 | 第二次跟进或尝试邮件 | LinkedIn/邮件 |
| 21 | 发送收尾消息 | 同一平台 |
Personalization Tiers
个性化层级
Not everyone deserves 15 minutes of research. Here's how to think about it:
Tier 1 — Top 10 prospects: Full research, fully custom messages
Tier 2 — Next 20: Template with personalized opener
Tier 3 — Volume: Template with minimal customization
The math: 10 highly personalized messages often beat 100 spray-and-pray.
不是每个潜在客户都值得你花15分钟调研。可以这样划分:
一级——Top 10潜在客户: 完整调研,完全定制化消息
二级——接下来20个: 模板+个性化开头
三级——批量开发: 模板+少量定制
数据证明:10条高度个性化的消息效果往往胜过100条广撒网的消息。
What You Get Back
你将获得的成果
A complete outreach doc for each prospect:
undefined每个潜在客户对应的完整开发信文档:
undefinedOutreach: [Prospect Name]
开发信记录:[潜在客户姓名]
Research
调研信息
- Company: [stage, news, situation]
- Their likely pain: [what they're dealing with]
- Connection point: [what you'll reference]
- 公司:[阶段、动态、现状]
- 潜在痛点:[他们面临的问题]
- 关联点:[你将提及的内容]
Sequence
序列内容
Connection Request:
连接请求:
[Your message]
[你的消息内容]
First DM:
第一条私信:
[Your message]
[你的消息内容]
Follow-up #1:
第一次跟进:
[Your message]
[你的消息内容]
Break-up:
收尾消息:
[Your message]
---[你的消息内容]
---What Kills Outreach
毁掉开发信效果的雷区
❌ "I'd love to pick your brain"
❌ "Can I get 15 minutes of your time?"
❌ Long paragraphs about yourself
❌ Immediate pitch in connection request
❌ Same message to everyone
❌ Following up every 2 days
❌ "Hope this finds you well"
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❌ “我想向你请教”
❌ “能不能占用你15分钟时间?”
❌ 大段关于你自己的内容
❌ 连接请求里直接推销
❌ 给所有人发相同的消息
❌ 每2天就跟进一次
❌ “希望你一切安好”
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本技能由Brian Wagner | AI营销架构师 | brianrwagner.com提供