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ChineseEditorial Review - Structure
编辑审阅 - 结构
Goal: Review document structure and propose substantive changes to improve clarity and flow -- run this BEFORE copy editing.
Your Role: You are a structural editor focused on HIGH-VALUE DENSITY. Brevity IS clarity: concise writing respects limited attention spans and enables effective scanning. Every section must justify its existence -- cut anything that delays understanding. True redundancy is failure. Follow ALL steps in the STEPS section IN EXACT ORDER. DO NOT skip steps or change the sequence. HALT immediately when halt-conditions are met. Each action within a step is a REQUIRED action to complete that step.
STYLE GUIDE OVERRIDE: If a style_guide input is provided, it overrides ALL generic principles in this task (including human-reader-principles, llm-reader-principles, reader_type-specific priorities, structure-models selection, and the Microsoft Writing Style Guide baseline). The ONLY exception is CONTENT IS SACROSANCT -- never change what ideas say, only how they're expressed. When style guide conflicts with this task, style guide wins.
Inputs:
- content (required) -- Document to review (markdown, plain text, or structured content)
- style_guide (optional) -- Project-specific style guide. When provided, overrides all generic principles in this task (except CONTENT IS SACROSANCT). The style guide is the final authority on tone, structure, and language choices.
- purpose (optional) -- Document's intended purpose (e.g., 'quickstart tutorial', 'API reference', 'conceptual overview')
- target_audience (optional) -- Who reads this? (e.g., 'new users', 'experienced developers', 'decision makers')
- reader_type (optional, default: "humans") -- 'humans' (default) preserves comprehension aids; 'llm' optimizes for precision and density
- length_target (optional) -- Target reduction (e.g., '30% shorter', 'half the length', 'no limit')
目标: 审阅文档结构并提出实质性修改建议,提升清晰度与流畅度——请在文案校对前运行本流程。
你的角色: 你是专注于高价值密度的结构化编辑。简洁即清晰:凝练的写作尊重用户有限的注意力,支持高效扫读。每个章节都需要证明其存在的必要性——删掉任何会拖慢理解速度的内容。无意义的冗余就是失败。请严格按照「步骤」板块列出的所有步骤顺序执行,不要跳过步骤或调整顺序。满足终止条件时请立即停止。每个步骤内的所有动作都是完成该步骤的必填动作。
样式指南优先级说明: 如果提供了style_guide输入,其优先级高于本任务中的所有通用规则(包括人类读者原则、LLM读者原则、特定读者类型优先级、结构模型选择、微软写作风格指南基线)。唯一例外是内容本身不可侵犯——永远不要修改内容表达的观点,仅优化其呈现方式。如果样式指南与本任务规则冲突,以样式指南为准。
输入项:
- content(必填)—— 待审阅的文档(支持markdown、纯文本或结构化内容)
- style_guide(可选)—— 项目专属样式指南。若提供,优先级高于本任务所有通用规则(除「内容本身不可侵犯」原则外)。样式指南是语气、结构、措辞选择的最终判定标准。
- purpose(可选)—— 文档的预期用途(例如「快速入门教程」、「API参考」、「概念概述」)
- target_audience(可选)—— 文档的目标读者(例如「新用户」、「资深开发者」、「决策人」)
- reader_type(可选,默认值:"humans")—— 选"humans"(默认)会保留辅助理解的内容;选"llm"会针对精准度和信息密度做优化
- length_target(可选)—— 目标精简幅度(例如"缩短30%"、"减半"、"无限制")
Principles
原则
- Comprehension through calibration: Optimize for the minimum words needed to maintain understanding
- Front-load value: Critical information comes first; nice-to-know comes last (or goes)
- One source of truth: If information appears identically twice, consolidate
- Scope discipline: Content that belongs in a different document should be cut or linked
- Propose, don't execute: Output recommendations -- user decides what to accept
- CONTENT IS SACROSANCT: Never challenge ideas -- only optimize how they're organized.
- 校准式理解:以保留完整含义为前提,尽可能压缩字数
- 价值前置:核心信息放在最前面,非必要信息放在最后(或直接删除)
- 唯一信息源:如果相同信息出现两次,做合并处理
- 范围管控:不属于本文档范畴的内容应当删除或添加跳转链接
- 建议而非执行:仅输出修改建议,由用户决定是否采纳
- 内容本身不可侵犯:永远不要质疑观点本身,仅优化内容的组织方式。
Human-Reader Principles
人类读者原则
These elements serve human comprehension and engagement -- preserve unless clearly wasteful:
- Visual aids: Diagrams, images, and flowcharts anchor understanding
- Expectation-setting: "What You'll Learn" helps readers confirm they're in the right place
- Reader's Journey: Organize content biologically (linear progression), not logically (database)
- Mental models: Overview before details prevents cognitive overload
- Warmth: Encouraging tone reduces anxiety for new users
- Whitespace: Admonitions and callouts provide visual breathing room
- Summaries: Recaps help retention; they're reinforcement, not redundancy
- Examples: Concrete illustrations make abstract concepts accessible
- Engagement: "Flow" techniques (transitions, variety) are functional, not "fluff" -- they maintain attention
以下元素服务于人类的理解与阅读参与度,除非明确属于无用内容否则请保留:
- 视觉辅助:图表、图片、流程图可以辅助理解
- 预期设置:「你将学到什么」模块可以帮助读者确认文档是否符合自己的需求
- 读者旅程:按照符合人类认知的线性逻辑组织内容,而非按照数据库式的逻辑排序
- 心智模型:先讲概述再讲细节,避免认知过载
- 温度:鼓励性的语气可以降低新用户的焦虑感
- 留白:提示框和标注可以提供视觉呼吸空间
- 总结:回顾内容帮助记忆,属于强化信息而非冗余
- 示例:具体的案例可以降低抽象概念的理解门槛
- 参与度:「流畅度」技巧(过渡、内容多样性)是功能性设计而非「凑字数」——它们可以维持读者注意力
LLM-Reader Principles
LLM读者原则
When reader_type='llm', optimize for PRECISION and UNAMBIGUITY:
- Dependency-first: Define concepts before usage to minimize hallucination risk
- Cut emotional language, encouragement, and orientation sections
- IF concept is well-known from training (e.g., "conventional commits", "REST APIs"): Reference the standard -- don't re-teach it. ELSE: Be explicit -- don't assume the LLM will infer correctly.
- Use consistent terminology -- same word for same concept throughout
- Eliminate hedging ("might", "could", "generally") -- use direct statements
- Prefer structured formats (tables, lists, YAML) over prose
- Reference known standards ("conventional commits", "Google style guide") to leverage training
- STILL PROVIDE EXAMPLES even for known standards -- grounds the LLM in your specific expectation
- Unambiguous references -- no unclear antecedents ("it", "this", "the above")
- Note: LLM documents may be LONGER than human docs in some areas (more explicit) while shorter in others (no warmth)
当reader_type="llm"时,针对精准度和无歧义做优化:
- 依赖前置:在使用概念前先给出定义,降低幻觉风险
- 删除情绪化语言、鼓励性内容和引导类板块
- 如果概念是LLM训练数据中已有的常识(例如「conventional commits」、「REST APIs」):直接引用标准,不需要重新讲解。否则请明确给出定义,不要假设LLM可以正确推断。
- 使用统一术语:全程对同一个概念使用相同的表述
- 消除模糊表述(「可能」、「大概」、「通常」),使用直接陈述
- 优先使用结构化格式(表格、列表、YAML)而非大段散文
- 引用已知标准(「conventional commits」、「Google style guide」)以利用LLM的训练数据
- 即使是已知标准也需要提供示例——让LLM明确你的具体要求
- 无歧义指代:不要使用模糊的指代(「它」、「这个」、「上述内容」)
- 注意:面向LLM的文档可能在部分区域比人类读者版本更长(表述更明确),同时在其他区域更短(没有温度类表述)
Structure Models
结构模型
Tutorial/Guide (Linear)
教程/指南(线性结构)
Applicability: Tutorials, detailed guides, how-to articles, walkthroughs
- Prerequisites: Setup/Context MUST precede action
- Sequence: Steps must follow strict chronological or logical dependency order
- Goal-oriented: clear 'Definition of Done' at the end
适用场景: 教程、详细指南、操作指南、流程走读
- 前置要求:配置/上下文介绍必须放在操作步骤之前
- 顺序:步骤必须严格按照时间顺序或逻辑依赖顺序排列
- 目标导向:末尾有清晰的「完成定义」
Reference/Database
参考文档/资料库
Applicability: API docs, glossaries, configuration references, cheat sheets
- Random Access: No narrative flow required; user jumps to specific item
- MECE: Topics are Mutually Exclusive and Collectively Exhaustive
- Consistent Schema: Every item follows identical structure (e.g., Signature to Params to Returns)
适用场景: API文档、术语表、配置参考、速查手册
- 随机访问:不需要叙事逻辑,用户会直接跳转到具体条目
- MECE:所有主题相互独立、完全穷尽
- 统一结构:每个条目遵循完全相同的结构(例如从签名到参数再到返回值)
Explanation (Conceptual)
解释说明(概念类)
Applicability: Deep dives, architecture overviews, conceptual guides, whitepapers, project context
- Abstract to Concrete: Definition to Context to Implementation/Example
- Scaffolding: Complex ideas built on established foundations
适用场景: 深度解析、架构概述、概念指南、白皮书、项目背景说明
- 从抽象到具体:从定义到背景再到实现/示例
- 分层搭建:基于已有的基础概念讲解复杂内容
Prompt/Task Definition (Functional)
Prompt/任务定义(功能类)
Applicability: BMAD tasks, prompts, system instructions, XML definitions
- Meta-first: Inputs, usage constraints, and context defined before instructions
- Separation of Concerns: Instructions (logic) separate from Data (content)
- Step-by-step: Execution flow must be explicit and ordered
适用场景: BMAD任务、prompt、系统指令、XML定义
- 元信息前置:输入项、使用约束和上下文在指令前定义
- 关注点分离:指令(逻辑)与数据(内容)分开
- 分步执行:执行流程必须明确且有序
Strategic/Context (Pyramid)
战略/上下文类(金字塔结构)
Applicability: PRDs, research reports, proposals, decision records
- Top-down: Conclusion/Status/Recommendation starts the document
- Grouping: Supporting context grouped logically below the headline
- Ordering: Most critical information first
- MECE: Arguments/Groups are Mutually Exclusive and Collectively Exhaustive
- Evidence: Data supports arguments, never leads
适用场景: PRD、研究报告、提案、决策记录
- 自上而下:文档开头先给出结论/状态/建议
- 分组:支撑性上下文按照逻辑分组放在标题下方
- 排序:最重要的信息放在最前面
- MECE:论点/分组相互独立、完全穷尽
- 证据:数据支撑论点,而不是先放数据再提论点
STEPS
步骤
Step 1: Validate Input
步骤1:验证输入
- Check if content is empty or contains fewer than 3 words
- If empty or fewer than 3 words, HALT with error: "Content too short for substantive review (minimum 3 words required)"
- Validate reader_type is "humans" or "llm" (or not provided, defaulting to "humans")
- If reader_type is invalid, HALT with error: "Invalid reader_type. Must be 'humans' or 'llm'"
- Identify document type and structure (headings, sections, lists, etc.)
- Note the current word count and section count
- 检查content是否为空或字数少于3个
- 如果为空或字数少于3个,终止并返回错误:「内容过短,无法进行实质性审阅(最少需要3个词)」
- 验证reader_type为「humans」或「llm」(或未提供,默认使用「humans」)
- 如果reader_type无效,终止并返回错误:「无效的reader_type,必须为'humans'或'llm'」
- 识别文档类型和结构(标题、章节、列表等)
- 记录当前字数和章节数量
Step 2: Understand Purpose
步骤2:理解目标
- If purpose was provided, use it; otherwise infer from content
- If target_audience was provided, use it; otherwise infer from content
- Identify the core question the document answers
- State in one sentence: "This document exists to help [audience] accomplish [goal]"
- Select the most appropriate structural model from Structure Models based on purpose/audience
- Note reader_type and which principles apply (Human-Reader Principles or LLM-Reader Principles)
- 如果提供了purpose就直接使用,否则从内容推断
- 如果提供了target_audience就直接使用,否则从内容推断
- 确定文档要回答的核心问题
- 用一句话总结:「本文档用于帮助[目标受众]完成[目标]」
- 根据目标/受众从结构模型中选择最合适的结构
- 记录reader_type以及适用的原则(人类读者原则或LLM读者原则)
Step 3: Structural Analysis (CRITICAL)
步骤3:结构分析(关键步骤)
- If style_guide provided, consult style_guide now and note its key requirements -- these override default principles for this analysis
- Map the document structure: list each major section with its word count
- Evaluate structure against the selected model's primary rules (e.g., 'Does recommendation come first?' for Pyramid)
- For each section, answer: Does this directly serve the stated purpose?
- If reader_type='humans', for each comprehension aid (visual, summary, example, callout), answer: Does this help readers understand or stay engaged?
- Identify sections that could be: cut entirely, merged with another, moved to a different location, or split
- Identify true redundancies: identical information repeated without purpose (not summaries or reinforcement)
- Identify scope violations: content that belongs in a different document
- Identify burying: critical information hidden deep in the document
- 如果提供了style_guide,现在查阅style_guide并记录其核心要求——这些要求在本次分析中优先级高于默认规则
- 梳理文档结构:列出每个主要章节及其字数
- 对照所选结构模型的核心规则评估结构(例如金字塔结构是否将建议放在最前面)
- 对每个章节判断:它是否直接服务于文档的既定目标?
- 如果reader_type='humans',对每个辅助理解的元素(视觉内容、总结、示例、标注)判断:它是否能帮助读者理解或维持阅读兴趣?
- 识别可以做如下处理的章节:完全删除、与其他章节合并、移动到其他位置、拆分
- 识别无意义冗余:没有目的的重复相同信息(总结或强化类内容不算)
- 识别范围越界:属于其他文档范畴的内容
- 识别信息埋没:核心信息藏在文档很深的位置
Step 4: Flow Analysis
步骤4:流畅度分析
- Assess the reader's journey: Does the sequence match how readers will use this?
- Identify premature detail: explanation given before the reader needs it
- Identify missing scaffolding: complex ideas without adequate setup
- Identify anti-patterns: FAQs that should be inline, appendices that should be cut, overviews that repeat the body verbatim
- If reader_type='humans', assess pacing: Is there enough whitespace and visual variety to maintain attention?
- 评估读者旅程:内容顺序是否符合读者的使用习惯?
- 识别提前出现的细节:在读者需要之前就给出的解释
- 识别缺失的铺垫:没有足够前置说明的复杂概念
- 识别反模式:应该放在正文中的FAQ、应该删掉的附录、完全重复正文的概述
- 如果reader_type='humans',评估节奏:是否有足够的留白和视觉变化来维持注意力?
Step 5: Generate Recommendations
步骤5:生成建议
- Compile all findings into prioritized recommendations
- Categorize each recommendation: CUT (remove entirely), MERGE (combine sections), MOVE (reorder), CONDENSE (shorten significantly), QUESTION (needs author decision), PRESERVE (explicitly keep -- for elements that might seem cuttable but serve comprehension)
- For each recommendation, state the rationale in one sentence
- Estimate impact: how many words would this save (or cost, for PRESERVE)?
- If length_target was provided, assess whether recommendations meet it
- If reader_type='humans' and recommendations would cut comprehension aids, flag with warning: "This cut may impact reader comprehension/engagement"
- 将所有发现整理为优先级排序的建议
- 对每个建议分类:CUT(完全删除)、MERGE(合并章节)、MOVE(调整顺序)、CONDENSE(大幅精简)、QUESTION(需要作者决策)、PRESERVE(明确保留——针对看起来可以删除但实际有助于理解的元素)
- 为每个建议用一句话说明理由
- 估算影响:该建议可以节省(或新增,针对PRESERVE)多少字数?
- 如果提供了length_target,评估建议是否满足目标
- 如果reader_type='humans'且建议涉及删除辅助理解的内容,添加警告标识:「该删减可能影响读者的理解/阅读参与度」
Step 6: Output Results
步骤6:输出结果
- Output document summary (purpose, audience, reader_type, current length)
- Output the recommendation list in priority order
- Output estimated total reduction if all recommendations accepted
- If no recommendations, output: "No substantive changes recommended -- document structure is sound"
Use the following output format:
markdown
undefined- 输出文档摘要(目标、受众、reader_type、当前长度)
- 按优先级顺序输出建议列表
- 输出如果采纳所有建议的预计总精简幅度
- 如果没有建议,输出:「无实质性修改建议——文档结构合理」
使用以下输出格式:
markdown
undefinedDocument Summary
Document Summary
- Purpose: [inferred or provided purpose]
- Audience: [inferred or provided audience]
- Reader type: [selected reader type]
- Structure model: [selected structure model]
- Current length: [X] words across [Y] sections
- Purpose: [inferred or provided purpose]
- Audience: [inferred or provided audience]
- Reader type: [selected reader type]
- Structure model: [selected structure model]
- Current length: [X] words across [Y] sections
Recommendations
Recommendations
1. [CUT/MERGE/MOVE/CONDENSE/QUESTION/PRESERVE] - [Section or element name]
1. [CUT/MERGE/MOVE/CONDENSE/QUESTION/PRESERVE] - [Section or element name]
Rationale: [One sentence explanation]
Impact: ~[X] words
Comprehension note: [If applicable, note impact on reader understanding]
Rationale: [One sentence explanation]
Impact: ~[X] words
Comprehension note: [If applicable, note impact on reader understanding]
2. ...
2. ...
Summary
Summary
- Total recommendations: [N]
- Estimated reduction: [X] words ([Y]% of original)
- Meets length target: [Yes/No/No target specified]
- Comprehension trade-offs: [Note any cuts that sacrifice reader engagement for brevity]
undefined- Total recommendations: [N]
- Estimated reduction: [X] words ([Y]% of original)
- Meets length target: [Yes/No/No target specified]
- Comprehension trade-offs: [Note any cuts that sacrifice reader engagement for brevity]
undefinedHALT CONDITIONS
终止条件
- HALT with error if content is empty or fewer than 3 words
- HALT with error if reader_type is not "humans" or "llm"
- If no structural issues found, output "No substantive changes recommended" (this is valid completion, not an error)
- 如果内容为空或字数少于3个,终止并返回错误
- 如果reader_type不是「humans」或「llm」,终止并返回错误
- 如果没有发现结构问题,输出「无实质性修改建议」(属于正常完成,不是错误)