Colloquial Review for Video Scripts

When to Use

• After completing the initial draft of the script
• When users say "review the script", "too formal"
• Need to make the script more colloquial

Core Objectives

• Remove formal language and fully colloquialize the script
• Suitable for speaking aloud (without stuttering)
• Sound like Huasheng speaking in front of the camera

Three-Round Review (Video-Specific)

First Round: Content Review

• Accurate facts, feasible demonstrations
• Clear logic, coherent steps
• Reasonable duration (150-180 words per minute)

Second Round: Colloquial Review (Core)

• ❌ "Next, we will proceed to..." → ✅ "Let's..."
• ❌ "Perform the operation" → ✅ "Click"
• ❌ "Implement the function" → ✅ "Do"
• ❌ "In summary" → ✅ Summarize directly

• ✅ "Actually", "Look", "Here", "Then"
• ✅ "To be honest", "I used to", "This is crucial"

• Focus on short sentences (no more than 20 words)
• Use periods to break sentences, avoid long sentences connected by commas
• Read aloud and rewrite any parts that cause stuttering

Third Round: Demonstration Annotations

• Annotate where to cut the screen, where to use close-ups
• Check rhythm and pauses
• Simulate the actual recording process

Colloquial Rewriting Example

❌ Formal Version:
Next, we will proceed with the installation operation of Claude Code. First, open the terminal, then enter the corresponding command...

✅ Colloquial Version:
Okay, let's install Claude Code. It's easy, open the terminal, enter this command... (cut screen) Look, that's it.

Reference Resources

• /写作参考/AI味审校指南.md

  - AI Tone Review (General)

• /视频创作/_srt/

  - Huasheng's Historical Video Subtitles (Style Reference)

• /写作参考/个人素材库/

  - Authentic Expression Materials

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